Jeremiah Wright
19 November 2012
Café Harmon
English 10
Grave Sites
I been all over the Untied states. I have seen many things. Done many things in my short life time. I got family all over the United States. From Florida to Mississippi To Arkansas. Even though its hot in Florida its still a cold world. I go down to Florida all most every summer. Its loads of things for me to do down there…I could never get bored. The Cool breeze from the sea blowing. The sun beaming down on me. Florida is the place to be. One of my favorite cousin I love to see stays down there.
Its always a joy to see him and his mother… its many sites to see down there..but its one site I always have to see before I leave.. my Grandmother grave site. She done so much for me in my life she’s the reason I’m the person I am today. She helped from the man you see today. She kept me out of so much trouble and gave me Great advice. She was the most wises kind hearted compassionate person I knew. So I show my love and gratitude by visiting her grave site every time I’m at Florida because I knew she would do the same for me.
When it’s time to leave Florida I head to my next stop and that is Mississippi. I go down there once a year to go to Outlets. I like to buy Polo ask anyone they will tell you. But It’s not much to see down there. Besides the shopping I got to see my grandfather grave site. My grandfather always loved me every time he saw me he always smiled.
My granddad and grandmother died a week apart. My Grandmother was in the hospital and my granddad was at my house. He died out of no where which didn't make any since to me we never told my grandmother that he passed away it would only make her feel worst. Then seven days later my grandmother died of sickness at the hospital . I always thought that he knew my grandmother was leavening soon so he wanted to build their dream house in heaven and surprise her for when she got up there. That’s just the type of guy my granddad was he was always hard working.
Then ill go back to Arkansas now its really nothing down here to see. But the only thing here is my little nephew grave site. He died very young not able to see the age of one.
But in the sort amount of time he was here him and I grew a very strong bound. I was gone treat him like he was my own. I miss the cry of him the smell of him everything about me. But im just here living life loving everyone around me because I will never know when my time to leave is. So I say to people to still have parnets the females with all the lip-stick cover your never to grown up to kiss and hug her that’s the only mom you have. To all the guys your never to tuff to hug your dad that’s the only dad you will get.
Its always a joy to see him and his mother… its many sites to see down there..but its one site I always have to see before I leave.. my Grandmother grave site. She done so much for me in my life she’s the reason I’m the person I am today. She helped from the man you see today. She kept me out of so much trouble and gave me Great advice. She was the most wises kind hearted compassionate person I knew. So I show my love and gratitude by visiting her grave site every time I’m at Florida because I knew she would do the same for me.
When it’s time to leave Florida I head to my next stop and that is Mississippi. I go down there once a year to go to Outlets. I like to buy Polo ask anyone they will tell you. But It’s not much to see down there. Besides the shopping I got to see my grandfather grave site. My grandfather always loved me every time he saw me he always smiled.
My granddad and grandmother died a week apart. My Grandmother was in the hospital and my granddad was at my house. He died out of no where which didn't make any since to me we never told my grandmother that he passed away it would only make her feel worst. Then seven days later my grandmother died of sickness at the hospital . I always thought that he knew my grandmother was leavening soon so he wanted to build their dream house in heaven and surprise her for when she got up there. That’s just the type of guy my granddad was he was always hard working.
Then ill go back to Arkansas now its really nothing down here to see. But the only thing here is my little nephew grave site. He died very young not able to see the age of one.
But in the sort amount of time he was here him and I grew a very strong bound. I was gone treat him like he was my own. I miss the cry of him the smell of him everything about me. But im just here living life loving everyone around me because I will never know when my time to leave is. So I say to people to still have parnets the females with all the lip-stick cover your never to grown up to kiss and hug her that’s the only mom you have. To all the guys your never to tuff to hug your dad that’s the only dad you will get.
I feel that you're off to a really great start, however you could use a lot more imagery and various types of sentences.(:
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